Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Challenge check-in number 1


I plan on doing challenge one, street art. I chose this specific challenge because I always wanted to do an assignment on the wall to see what it actually means. I’m more interested in things that I can see. I’m more of a visual person so this should be an interesting challenge.

1. Street Art

Go to SW 34th Street's "Graffiti Wall" in Gainesville. Locate an image on the wall that you think represents some aspect of hip-hop or hip-hop culture. Then, perform a rhetorical analysis on the image. Explain in your analysis why you think the image represents some aspect of hip-hop culture and how you, personally relate to the image. Justify, rationalize, and explain the reasoning behind the choice of the image. Include a picture of the image in your response.

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Kobe is a snitch


Counter Argument and Rubettal to Kobe is a Snitch

The counter argument to Kobe being a snitch is that he is not a snitch. Some people may argue that Kobe did not tell on Shaq because he did not specifically say what Shaq did. Kobe just stated that he should have did the same thing. Some may also argue that Kobe was not trying to tell on Shaq but was just saying this kind of stuff happens all the time. So when he was talking to the media he did not actually tell what happen, he was putting it in a way to make it seem like he wasn’t telling on Shaq.

While I understand where others see Kobe not as a snitch, I still argue that he is. First, he did not need to say what Shaq really did because Kobe was being interviewed by the media about the accusation of sexual assault. When he said he should have done what Shaq did, he was already giving to much information that could get Shaq in trouble. Next, I would argue that Kobe did bring up Shaq on purpose. Kobe wanted all the attention off himself, so he felt the need to put Shaq in the spot light. Kobe wanted to point out that since Shaq paid to keep people quiet and he should have done it to. Since Kobe used Shaq’s name and an example he is a snitch. He did not have to use Shaq’s name if he was trying to argue that this kind of stuff happens all the time. Kobe is a snitch because he did not have to bring Shaq’s name in the interview if he wasn’t asked about it, but instead he did it on purpose. Kobe wanted all the weight off his shoulders and that is what it means to be a snitch.

Thursday, October 16, 2014

Evaluative Writing


 

I think evaluative writing is something that is valuable to the reader because it give the reader a sense to whether the thing being written about is good or bad.

 

It is important to establish criteria because it help readers to determine whether something is good or valuable. For a writer, criteria helps support the argument being made.

 

In this essay “It’s Easy, But Wrong to Blame the Music” I chose question #2. The question is “What does Rose mean by music is an outlet”. She means that parents and older kids can talk about the hard things that are going on and the things they are feeling. Yes I think music is an outlet for feelings, mood, and attitude. Before a football game I listen to music because it gives me the energy and changes the way I approach the game.

Sunday, October 5, 2014

Blog Post #2


Coming up as a young adult I made a decision with my family that will take me miles in life. It all started 10th grade summer when I attended multiple football campus doing something I love the most. I had no idea I would be invited to campus in the 10th grade, but after to talking to my high school coaches and family the best thing for me was to go to get experience and learn new things. After attending my first camp, which was here at the University of Florida, I felt like I did pretty well. I did not have a clue I would get an offer from UF that young, but it happened. After I left the camp, I attended FSU and University of Alabama’s camps to see if I would receive scholarship offers as well. It came true, as well as other schools just started to offer me without attended their campus. After all this settled down, I start visiting their campuses and going to games to see where I would be spending my next 3 to 4 years. It was between FSU, UF, and Alabama. Me and my family got together and discussed my decision and came down to UF. The reason why I chose UF was because I felt like I was home when I came on my visits. The atmosphere here was just great as I attended the games. The coaches showed lots of love every time I came to visit the school and games.

The song that I chose that represents this decision is “Rich Homie Quan-Finally Made It”